Below you will find the new chapter one of the Macrobia project (which I somehow deleted this morning).
The events as you read them here take place around 4,500 B.C. on Earth. What Jason is trying to do is pull a Ted Dekker stunt (author of the Red, Black, and White trilogy). Dr. Michael Perez is now Malchius in chapter one. The goal, see, is to take Dr. MP back to the future Earth sort of like Dr. Ransom in Perelandra and That Hideous Strength. Actually, this is me trying to merge Perelandra and THS into one book with different charcters and a somewhat different plot.
I can keep the same plot (more or less) can't I? Ayn Rand did it all the time.